I don't know if it helps or not... but when I put the article into Source mode, I have spellcheck that finds all sorts of mistakes for me. I know some people don't have the spellcheck set up, but it's worth a shot as a final review mechanism before posting an article. Obviously, words specific to the game like Dunwall, Morleyan, and such may show up as wrong, but that is to be expected.
To your other point: I un-italicized it for the time being, as it looked odd otherwise. If someone else, such as Essie, 8-Bit, or Piko says different then we can put it back the way you originally had it.