Talk:Kirin Jindosh/Loudspeaker Comments/@comment-26199726-20190411162848/@comment-732225-20190412034604

Very nicely done! I didn't think you could cover that much in such a shot time. I jist made an edit, mainly to change the layout. Personnaly, I think we should limit the levels of bullet points to two, whenever possible. So I raised the tier of some points to reduce tier-3 ones and eliminate tier-4 altogether. There are also a few quotes that are very similar, save for a few alternating words. For those, I grouped together and use [A/B/C] format to represent the differences. I will try to think of more way to polish, let me know if there is anything not ok.