Thread:Essie Essex/@comment-16533050-20141204095746

Hey, I just made a bunch of updates/edits to the http://dishonored.wikia.com/wiki/Loudspeaker/Announcements page to catch it up with new pages that have been created since its inception.

You're better at catching things than I, so if you have time, please check my work.

Also, the this edit I did http://dishonored.wikia.com/wiki/Loudspeaker/Announcements?diff=84567&oldid=84566 was because the sentence didn't quite sound right. Does it sound alright now? I still don't know if its worded correctly, as Corvo can destroy BOTH glasses of wine and Campbell and Curnow can go down to Campbell's hidden room without the alarm sounding.

Please advise.

Thanks. :)

- Geist 