Talk:Corvo Attano/@comment-5607198-20121015063555

Snowkeeper, on your last edit, it should read

"everyone knows [he was] fucking the empress"

you are putting the quote in, but pendletons line "evveryone knows you were fucking" doesnt make sense in that grammatical context. You can't direct quote and alter the words, you bracket the altered words that allow the quote to make sense where it is placed