User blog comment:Fradi780/Fan fiction powers,(Fradi)/@comment-26536672-20160925222800

(Demonic Touch) Assuming the details are what you posted on my own blog, I do like the idea of being able to magically "corrupt", essentially turning enemies into non-hostiles. I am unsure about the bribe mechanic, however, as that overcomplicates the ability when you should otherwise be able to pickpocket the target and open the door yourself. It does remind me of Marionette, especially with the ability to induce fear/insanity. I think a higher mana cost and a limit on the number of corrupted people at any given moment is better than a health cost, however.

(Void Friend) Pretty interesting, although it does sound rather reminiscent of a multi-tendril Blood Briar.

(Soul Terror) This is not very clear. Is it a burst AOE that radiates from the caster? If so, the different effects seem a bit incongruous, if not overpowered.

(Outsider's Eye) Same case. By "outcome" do you mean patrol routes or impending attacks? Also, I think the whole "telepathic conversation" idea is an overcomplication of the power. I am of the opinion that usage variety should stem from versatility, not complexity.

(Sew Time) Same thing as Mice.

(River Krust Scale) Sounds better suited to a powerful, perhaps corrupted bone charm.

(Outsider's Blood) I like the whole idea of a low-health-activated set of powers, but I am confused by the effects you proposed, especially the whole "void glimpse" thing.