Talk:Spring Razor/@comment-3242762-20161024105426/@comment-6716431-20161024111107

The inventory entry states "When triggered, this tightly-wound mechanism throws up a cloud of shrapnel. Can be locked onto most surfaces. Tirggered by vibration." Some of what you said is true, such as the spring razor not being a pile of coiled wire, while other parts are your interpretation of the matter. To disembowel is to cut open and remove the internal organs of, and it certainly cuts people open and you can see internal organs. However, I do agree overall, that sentence does need rephrasing somehow. Do you have any ideas of what to say instead?