Thread:Essie Essex/@comment-16533050-20140516065520

...but I wanted to bring up a question I have concerning one of your edits. After our last incident, I'd rather query you here than on the comments section of the page itself.

Concerning your edit here: http://dishonored.wikia.com/wiki/City_Watch_Officers?diff=74675&oldid=74531

I would have to disagree... not with the info itself, but where it happens to be placed.

I don't believe that the rank of Corporal should be included within the page of City Watch Officers. The ranks themselves (at least as I understand the trivia point) should be the ranks held by just the City Watch Officers, not the City Watch in general.

I've known about the rank of Corporal existing in the game, but I always thought it was held by lesser City Watchman, such as Watch Lower Guard even City Watch Guard.

The basis of my argument for this is that Sergeant Heyburn, who is only a City Watch Guard, holds a rank above that of Corporal (assuming Dunwall uses the same military rank we do).

Therefore, I believe the rank of Corporal should be something posted in the City Watch page (as well as other rankings - Sergeant, Lieutenant, Captain, etc), since we don't know if the actual rank of Corporal is held by a City Watch Guard, or a Watch Lower Guard.

What do you think? Does my query sound okay? I hope I didn't ramble too much with it, as I was merely trying to state my case.

Please advise.

- Geist 