Thread:Lucifur Macomb/@comment-16241899-20160927155652

Greetings.

I reworded your additions to Lady Boyle a bit. I removed the last bit about Zhukov and Galia Fleet for now, because it was worded poorly and very unclear who did what, especially the bit about Galia. Since I don't know the book yet, I was not able to fix it myself. Feel free to re-add the information, but please be clearer this time as to what is actually happening. Thank you.

- Piko 