User blog comment:MDGeistMD02/New Chap Up!/@comment-17194369-20131210154855

Akila has quite a low voice for a woman... ;)

I like reading this, but I do desire more progression of the story. Self-contained adventures like this one are fun, but they do also seem a bit like filler.

Putting Pieter and Rodof Mansfeld in it would be a nice touch, though.