Thread:Lucifur Macomb/@comment-5607198-20160928123536/@comment-5607198-20160928213239

Furthermore:

You are not wrtiing a novel. You are summarizing important items from a novel. We dont need flowery descriptions and prose.

You also have a SERIOUS issue with your subject-verb aggreements.

I know you're excited to add stuff. but please, take a minute to proofread, make sure your sentences make sense, and ask yourself "is this really relevant? Is there anything that can be removed from this post without losing anything important?"