Thread:Harry Flynn/@comment-16241899-20171015163409

Hey,

before you go on and put more work into Emily's biography, please note that the descriptions you add are still too detailed, and subheaders dividing each mission are not necessary. Look at Corvo's entries for D1 and D2 for example. If you could create a summary of the D2 events roughly of that length, that would be great, and is absolutely enough.

Thank you.

- Piko 