Thread:Lucifur Macomb/@comment-5607198-20160928123536/@comment-7230171-20160928233602

I am deeply sorry.

The initial past/present stick was my misunderstanding of how the wiki enveloped the present, following more "Dishonored 2 is the most recent thing we're writing about (the novel is set before it) so that is the 'present' - 1852, and everything before it is 'past'." Whereas now I've realised it enveloped more to "At the time of [the novel] VS the time before [the novel]."

I have been talking with the other active editors too, and apologise for any mistakes. For what it's worth, I have read the Manual of Style and such pages.

Some excess information was a matter of adding context to something, still allowing it to make sense. An example (not related to Dishonored) perhaps being: "Jeff was pushed into the concotion by Mark," and it elevates the need for a basic description of what he's being pushed into. But yes, you are right, there is excess there which should (and will) be chopped.