Talk:Jaime Carrera/@comment-16533050-20170204093612/@comment-16533050-20170204095108

Using the Manual of Style as a shield does not preclude poor writing of an article.

The entire second paragraph of the Biography alone can be reworded so as to NOT include every single physical action that Jaime could still do.

Rather, it seems as if the MoS is being used as an excuse to do unnecessary things, which is not its original intention.