Thread:PikovajaDama/@comment-4584132-20171022191353/@comment-16241899-20171022194033

You still need to cut back on that. You are still describing low chaos and high chaos alternatives, which should not be done in the biography, and you also give away way too many  clues. Detailed infos about the missions (i.e. discoveries Emily makes throughout her jorney, things she learns from Meagan, the content of mission clues popping up after certain of  Emily's actions etc.) belong on the MISSION PAGES.

Look at the Dishonored section on Corvo's page again. Do you see how vaguely everything is described? Imagine you would have to sum up the content of D2 for the back of a book cover. What would you write then? Try it. :)