Talk:Dunwall/@comment-16533050-20160608172250/@comment-26007095-20160608175237

I enjoy flowery language but I also think, for the sake of accessibility, we should avoid needlessly esoteric or complex terms unless they're needed. Basically, ask yourself "would I understand this if I wasn't good at English?" when writing.

That said, I think both the old and new edit sound fine in this case.