User blog comment:Essie Essex/Love, Your Bastards: Part III/@comment-16241899-20130920162429

Hey there,

I'm just through your second and third chap. Very well written, as usual. I really enjoy your style. I like how varied it is. You know, very grim stuff in the one chapter (those bits about Lizzy were creepy), and really humourus bits in the next one ( good chuckles about those gossip conversations and mocking).

There's only one bit, that seemed strange to me. How did Mace and Kitty make it off the boat? I was very surprised to find them alive and well in the next chap. After the end of the second one I assumed them dead. Or did I just miss something?

Oh, and I knew it. The moment they, and also the Eels, had problems opening those crates, I knew they would not find what they were searching for. :D