Talk:Daud/@comment-27202257-20130909051502/@comment-6301921-20130909053907

I think it works where you put it, even though it didn't happen in TBW. It clarifies the timeline, which is always helpful, and your transitions are smooth enough to fit the added events without it being too noticeable.

I'm not sure if what I just wrote made any sense. Sorry. Words are hard.