Talk:Shadow Walk/@comment-16533050-20180602070529/@comment-16533050-20180602085027

I consulted with a trusted source and as she believes the current format is not inappropriate, the change will stand in its current form.

For the future, however, I would advise against using the argument of "making it more clinically precise is therefore unnecessary and - as argued already - clunky" after doing EXACTLY that. It honestly read fine the previous way as well before your current edit.

As I don't wish to continue with an, at this point, unnecessary edit war, I'm going to let the matter lie.