Talk:Zhukov/@comment-3242762-20161018122332/@comment-16241899-20161018154404

The page appears off-tone because it is way too detailed compared to our usual style for character pages. For example, we would mention under Biography that he was betrayed and sentenced to freedom, but not mention every step of how the betrayal was carried out. Neither should the "The Corroded Man" section retell every single move Zhukov made in carryiyng out his plans, thus basically retelling the plot. Rather it should be a summary of his role.The right place for a detailed plot summary would be the actual book page.

A mix of tenses and half-sentences makes it also a stylistic mess.

Like Ox said, feel free to trim it down/fix it.